Got a manuscript hidden away under your bed and want to know if it’s publishable? Been writing in secret for years and feel in need of some professional guidance?
Victoria Connelly has a degree in literature, is a trained English teacher and has been teaching creative writing and critiquing manuscripts for over ten years. As a published novelist, she knows all the mistakes that new writers make – she used to make them all herself! Now, she’s the bestselling author of five novels, one of which has been made into a film.
There are many excellent critique services available but this one is different. Competitively priced, you know exactly who is going to read your manuscript.
Specialising in modern women’s fiction, Victoria is happy to advise beginners in most genres including children’s fiction and autobiography.
* * * SUMMER SPECIAL – £10 OFF ALL PRICES! * * *
Prices:
(computer word count)
First three chapters (up to 20,000 words) - £59
20,000 – 50,000 words – £99
50,000 – 75,000 words - £149
75,000 – 100,000 words - £199
100,000 – 120,000 words – £249
These prices also include a follow-up email if you have any queries about your report.
What you get:
You will be given a report of approximately 1,000 words, focusing on your chosen genre, plot, characterisation, dialogue, viewpoint, and general layout, grammar etc.
If your work is of a publishable standard, Victoria can advise you on how to approach agents and editors.
She aims to get back to you within three weeks and will let you know if it is going to take longer.
In the first instance, email:
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with details of your book (include genre and word count). If Victoria is able to accept your work, she will confirm the price, turnaround time and manuscript delivery address.
What happens next?
Email submissions are not accepted so print out your manuscript.
Use double-line spacing on white A4 paper. Print on one side only. Each page should be named, titled and numbered.
Write a one-page synopsis of your novel.
Send a title page with your contact details (an email address is essential).
Include information about your experience – is this your first novel? Have you submitted it to anyone?
Include return postage in stamps in a separate envelope if you want your manuscript returned, otherwise your report will be sent via email. Also include a self-addressed label with your address on. Put this in the envelope with your return postage.
If you would like notes made on your manuscript in pencil, indicate this in your covering letter.
Post your manuscript in a padded envelope. There is no need to send it by courier or recorded delivery. Fill in a free ‘Proof of Postage’ form from the Post Office.
Use only an elastic band to fasten your manuscript. Do not use paperclips or staples.

